Ideas and Content:
My writings demonstrate appropriate ideas and content because unlike the Alchemist essay where my writing felt a bit empty and weak, my JC essay sticked to the and was a bit more specific. I would improve by backing up my ideas with stronger facts.
Organization:
My writing has demonstrated good organization because since the Alchemist essay, I have stuck to writing with a common theme in mind. In the Alchemist essay I followed the theme of understanding oneself and facing those obstacles, and in the JC essay I have stuck to the theme about Cassius' disease like motifs to kill Caesar.
Personal Growth:
I do feel that I have grown and this is so because I have actually liked reading a bit more, but not as much as to waste two hours just reading but enough to get a good understanding of what has happened in the story.
SLR:
The SLR i have used would be to Reason Critically. This SLR is important to get a great result in writing because with this SLR, I would be able to chose the best fact and the best quotes that will enhance my writing.
